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Suckled My lower lip swells gently Like a rose in bud after a summer shower I have what I need, I am ready to be opened I am opening already And inside, an invitation That can only be read by You. Oh, I came Here ripe and ready as the swollen summer moon. On a sweet, still moment our fates linger, waiting On a pregnant, prescient pause. Quiet, comes the Quivering storm.
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 3:24 PM UTC
Quiverstorm
Suckled My lower lip swells gently Like a rose in bud after a summer shower I have what I need, I am ready to be opened I am opening already And inside, an invitation That can only be read by You. Oh, I came Here ripe and ready as the swollen summer moon. On a sweet, still moment our fates linger, waiting On a pregnant, prescient pause. Quiet, comes the Quivering storm.
When I originally posted this poem it ended it after the word 'you'. I felt it needed something more, but some people preferred the shorter version, so...it can be read either way, I'd be interested to know which version people prefer.
AmandaIS
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 3:24 PM UTC
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