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The rain, the rain, drives me insane It patters on my windowpane. Each single drop of rain that’s spent Leaves my mind in such torment. A feeling that I can’t explain The torture of the pouring rain. 6 Please let it stop, it can’t go on, My sanity will soon be gone. Pitter, Patter, Patter, Pit, it Drives me mad, I cannot sit. Each successive single drop Makes my brain want to pop. The sound torments, I have no peace. With every drop the sounds increase. It feels as if my brains on fire And I’ve begun to mass perspire. The sweat that trickles from my brow, Begins to Pitter, Patter, now. 18 Oh Water God, please rescue me, Stop the rain and set me free. Hear my prayers and let me go. Remove the curse of H2O I did nothing to create Please let me be, I’m in a state. I’ll begin to beg and cry, Set me free, I’d rather die. The pain, the pain inside my head, I’d be better off if dead. Hear my plea, I beg please do I just don’t know what else to do. 30 I’ll hold a pillow to my ears And mop up my cascading tears, It’s water, water, everywhere. My mind has just become a blur. I can’t go on, I cannot breath, I’ll hang myself and take my leave. Still the rain it patters down, Someone save me, or I’ll drown. My minds in a submerging pool, Oh Water God, why be so cruel. Let the falling water cease. It can’t go on please give me peace. 42 Pitter, Patter, Patter, Pit, Pitter, Pitter, Pit, Pit, Pit. Water running down the drain, The excruciating, crippling pain. The racking of each nervous cell Ringing out my own death knell. Deafening noise I can’t keep out, Grant my prayer, send a drought. Let my mind have peace again, Remove the daggers from my brain. Oh Water God don’t torture me Stop this rain and let me be. 54 If you’ll just grant one single wish And leave the water to the fish. Don’t let it fall upon my glass. Each single, soggy, squishy, splash. Then I’ll forever sing your praise, Forgive me Lord, it’s just a phase
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Dec 8, 2009
Dec 8, 2009 at 7:57 AM UTC
WATER TORTURE
The rain, the rain, drives me insane It patters on my windowpane. Each single drop of rain that’s spent Leaves my mind in such torment. A feeling that I can’t explain The torture of the pouring rain. 6 Please let it stop, it can’t go on, My sanity will soon be gone. Pitter, Patter, Patter, Pit, it Drives me mad, I cannot sit. Each successive single drop Makes my brain want to pop. The sound torments, I have no peace. With every drop the sounds increase. It feels as if my brains on fire And I’ve begun to mass perspire. The sweat that trickles from my brow, Begins to Pitter, Patter, now. 18 Oh Water God, please rescue me, Stop the rain and set me free. Hear my prayers and let me go. Remove the curse of H2O I did nothing to create Please let me be, I’m in a state. I’ll begin to beg and cry, Set me free, I’d rather die. The pain, the pain inside my head, I’d be better off if dead. Hear my plea, I beg please do I just don’t know what else to do. 30 I’ll hold a pillow to my ears And mop up my cascading tears, It’s water, water, everywhere. My mind has just become a blur. I can’t go on, I cannot breath, I’ll hang myself and take my leave. Still the rain it patters down, Someone save me, or I’ll drown. My minds in a submerging pool, Oh Water God, why be so cruel. Let the falling water cease. It can’t go on please give me peace. 42 Pitter, Patter, Patter, Pit, Pitter, Pitter, Pit, Pit, Pit. Water running down the drain, The excruciating, crippling pain. The racking of each nervous cell Ringing out my own death knell. Deafening noise I can’t keep out, Grant my prayer, send a drought. Let my mind have peace again, Remove the daggers from my brain. Oh Water God don’t torture me Stop this rain and let me be. 54 If you’ll just grant one single wish And leave the water to the fish. Don’t let it fall upon my glass. Each single, soggy, squishy, splash. Then I’ll forever sing your praise, Forgive me Lord, it’s just a phase
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Dec 8, 2009
Dec 8, 2009 at 7:57 AM UTC
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