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Ba-bum. Ba-bum. Ba-bum. Ba-  CRACK (hear that?                   my heart just broke.) And- it's your fault. All of you. You hideous, gorgeous, creatures. Everything you write Makes me want to cry Breaks my beating heart Takes, and takes, and takes.                          And then Everything you write Gives my heart hope Lives in my soul. Returns, returns, returns. How can we do it? How can we possibly do it? Play god? Give life! Give death! Take hope! Take mourning! Every day, we create tiny universes, pocket worlds, works of art. Every day, we destroy the same. Only one explanation. We must be mad!
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Jul 26, 2014
Jul 26, 2014 at 11:40 PM UTC
A raw reaction to The Hideaway Girl
Ba-bum. Ba-bum. Ba-bum. Ba-  CRACK (hear that?                   my heart just broke.) And- it's your fault. All of you. You hideous, gorgeous, creatures. Everything you write Makes me want to cry Breaks my beating heart Takes, and takes, and takes.                          And then Everything you write Gives my heart hope Lives in my soul. Returns, returns, returns. How can we do it? How can we possibly do it? Play god? Give life! Give death! Take hope! Take mourning! Every day, we create tiny universes, pocket worlds, works of art. Every day, we destroy the same. Only one explanation. We must be mad!
(crazed grin) Inspired by a poem I saw tonight that made me honestly sad. Go check it out: http://hellopoetry.com/poem/797174/the-hideaway-girl/
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Jul 26, 2014
Jul 26, 2014 at 11:40 PM UTC
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