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Coming down with something      blame summer      point a finger at the city worn-down pizzazz      drunk trumpets and I hide in my coat      trees look better without leaves is it just me?    see the sun bellow    into buildings student affairs    like heat rash bounce along hallways foreign mumbo-jumbo    mishpelt words they say *him met her saw six pictures last night* I haven’t met me    books know truth not brunettes good poetry better than ***    they’re running running running away with it between spritzers    and sandwiches    now snooze until Halloween    brown back in fashion     caught in the middle     piedra de aguacate I handle guitars     they fiddle with women now      let apple juice trickle from my lips    and a man gets out a taxi     drops his phone
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 5:06 PM UTC
Morningside Heights
Coming down with something      blame summer      point a finger at the city worn-down pizzazz      drunk trumpets and I hide in my coat      trees look better without leaves is it just me?    see the sun bellow    into buildings student affairs    like heat rash bounce along hallways foreign mumbo-jumbo    mishpelt words they say *him met her saw six pictures last night* I haven’t met me    books know truth not brunettes good poetry better than ***    they’re running running running away with it between spritzers    and sandwiches    now snooze until Halloween    brown back in fashion     caught in the middle     piedra de aguacate I handle guitars     they fiddle with women now      let apple juice trickle from my lips    and a man gets out a taxi     drops his phone
Written: July 2014. Explanation: A poem written in my own time, another dealing with the 'city', in contrast to my ongoing beach/sea series. Quite different from my normal style of work, and expect more in the future veering towards this style. NOT based on real events, although partially inspired by them. 'Piedra de aguacate' is Spanish for 'avocado stone.' Feedback appreciated as always.
reece-aj-chambers
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 5:06 PM UTC
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