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smoke all i could see was smoke and flashing lights everything is gone all gone what surprised me most, though, was the absence of pain there was one thing on my mind my family standing beside me could never be replaced that "everything" isn't really gone **my family, standing beside me, could never be replaced**
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 1:21 AM UTC
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smoke all i could see was smoke and flashing lights everything is gone all gone what surprised me most, though, was the absence of pain there was one thing on my mind my family standing beside me could never be replaced that "everything" isn't really gone **my family, standing beside me, could never be replaced**
I wrote this for my best friend, who's house burned down today. Her family is okay, so thank god.
sophiee
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 1:21 AM UTC
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