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our time in this universe is ridden with a luminous oddity for light is a rarity in the biorhythm of the macrocosm the normality is jet nothing inky, obsidian slate such liquid void drips laboriously completely free from ejecting effort like beads of pine sap among evergreen needles seeping in a slowed, oozing, endless rush at gravity's inevitable, gentle tug eventually it will consume the cosmos like maple syrup poured atop a whole-grain waffle primarily, the charcoal sweetness fills the quite purposeful lack of solidified batter but then greedily begins to swallow the flaky bread it bleeds spurting with immense weight and impossible magnitude until each limb dissolves drifting away in the acidic salt of onyx crimson what would I see at this inevitable state? I am in a cave open to the same air as the peaks of mountains and it is so dark I see more color with my eyes closed my vision feigns my mind I almost believe the expected: the twirling endless cluster of shining cream spiraling above my head
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 3:55 PM UTC
phosphene
our time in this universe is ridden with a luminous oddity for light is a rarity in the biorhythm of the macrocosm the normality is jet nothing inky, obsidian slate such liquid void drips laboriously completely free from ejecting effort like beads of pine sap among evergreen needles seeping in a slowed, oozing, endless rush at gravity's inevitable, gentle tug eventually it will consume the cosmos like maple syrup poured atop a whole-grain waffle primarily, the charcoal sweetness fills the quite purposeful lack of solidified batter but then greedily begins to swallow the flaky bread it bleeds spurting with immense weight and impossible magnitude until each limb dissolves drifting away in the acidic salt of onyx crimson what would I see at this inevitable state? I am in a cave open to the same air as the peaks of mountains and it is so dark I see more color with my eyes closed my vision feigns my mind I almost believe the expected: the twirling endless cluster of shining cream spiraling above my head
For those of you who do not know, 'phosphene' is the term used to describe the phenomenon that occurs behind closed eyes when one sees sparks of colors, regardless  of the presence of actual, visible light. It has been described as 'a universe behind my eyelids' and 'the stars I see with my eyes closed'. (also yes, the comparison of the universe to a waffle was meant to be somewhat comical)
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 3:55 PM UTC
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