My brother's somewhere hiding,
first comes counting, then comes finding
but this child that I am minding
my last nerve he's tightly winding
Mum and Dad have gone out dining
on their date night, romance shining
while the little brat is whining
hidden in the curtain lining
So I'll get on with my writing
cause it must be more exciting
to be sat here with my rhyming
as my skills they need refining.
Now the little ork is pining
still not found, my name he's crying
eyes accusing me of lying....
Is a pinky promise binding?
Jul 15, 2014
Jul 15, 2014 at 2:12 PM UTC
My brother's somewhere hiding,
first comes counting, then comes finding
but this child that I am minding
my last nerve he's tightly winding
Mum and Dad have gone out dining
on their date night, romance shining
while the little brat is whining
hidden in the curtain lining
So I'll get on with my writing
cause it must be more exciting
to be sat here with my rhyming
as my skills they need refining.
Now the little ork is pining
still not found, my name he's crying
eyes accusing me of lying....
Is a pinky promise binding?
My last bit of homework for the year is to write a rhyming piece, this is it, I have to hand it in tomorrow, any feedback or suggestion is appreciated, as my teacher is a *** so I want it to be perfect!
