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Subtitle: concert cherry popped His eyes, full of wonder glued to the stage waiting for the band to assume the position sun not yet set the thump thump thumping begins. His hands raise up he joins the crowd still melting in to the beat as the sun beats too. Intermission intrigues and builds suspense he doesn't know the process yet. The sun slips behind the flagpole then the jumbo-tron racing the light show (all purples and greens). The crowd roars to life at the first strum and drum. He jumps to his seat already wearing the overpriced t-shirt he bought lips moving, reciting the words he has memorized from setting the CD to repeat head bobbing keeping a perfect beat. When the sun finally sleeps he gets the full effect: light show, big drums, guitar solo, stage smoke- No encore (musically speaking) but a visual symphony as the fireworks make smiley faces in the full moon sky.
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Jul 14, 2014
Jul 14, 2014 at 11:23 AM UTC
A player at the big show
Subtitle: concert cherry popped His eyes, full of wonder glued to the stage waiting for the band to assume the position sun not yet set the thump thump thumping begins. His hands raise up he joins the crowd still melting in to the beat as the sun beats too. Intermission intrigues and builds suspense he doesn't know the process yet. The sun slips behind the flagpole then the jumbo-tron racing the light show (all purples and greens). The crowd roars to life at the first strum and drum. He jumps to his seat already wearing the overpriced t-shirt he bought lips moving, reciting the words he has memorized from setting the CD to repeat head bobbing keeping a perfect beat. When the sun finally sleeps he gets the full effect: light show, big drums, guitar solo, stage smoke- No encore (musically speaking) but a visual symphony as the fireworks make smiley faces in the full moon sky.
Not a bad first concert experience for a 9 y/o boy (and his 7 y/o sister)....free tickets for Imagine Dragons....outside....with hip-hop band Atmosphere (hometown heroes) opening.  I couldn't take my eyes off of him despite the giant stage in front of us.
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Jul 14, 2014
Jul 14, 2014 at 11:23 AM UTC
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