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Cut this Keep that. This is clutter. This so good. reword this. I felt you here. This is awkward This is powerful. I'm being pulled in a tug of war between good and bad. And sometimes I want to give up. But I can't. My piece must be as beautiful As blown glass. And even if I die getting there. It will work.
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Jul 9, 2014
Jul 9, 2014 at 1:10 PM UTC
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Cut this Keep that. This is clutter. This so good. reword this. I felt you here. This is awkward This is powerful. I'm being pulled in a tug of war between good and bad. And sometimes I want to give up. But I can't. My piece must be as beautiful As blown glass. And even if I die getting there. It will work.
iris-rebry
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Jul 9, 2014
Jul 9, 2014 at 1:10 PM UTC
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