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My brow furrowed as she read my palm and whispered of growing interest. "What?" I asked; I had my qualms about the foretelling of a future I haven't decided to live. But I smell the darkness in the incense. I trace the tendrils of the incense with forehead firmly within my palm. The streets below are live with persons of little interest, hustling toward a fuller future. Renew me, my qualms. Not that I had qualms, banana-flavored incense replacing patois in my future. The lurid waves slide over my palm. instill a touch of colder interest. With each sandy step, I live. And as the water fills my shoes, I live. When I quietly lose interest the ocean shows it too has qualms. The brine coalesces like incense as my nails dig into the skin of my palm. For I seek a better future than the unforgiving future that chose not to live. The salt stings the holes in my palm and instantly I have no qualms, just a lingering fleck of incense arousing mild interest. The ocean betrayed not the slightest interest being the shepherd of my future. Rivulets of water became the incense That I would breathe to live. Instinct expressed fervent qualms, as I pressed my mouth with my open palm. It was the incense in which I held the most interest. Her finger traced my palm, mumbling of a better future ahead for me to live, free from petty qualms.
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Nov 25, 2010
Nov 25, 2010 at 1:17 AM UTC
Oceanic Crossing
My brow furrowed as she read my palm and whispered of growing interest. "What?" I asked; I had my qualms about the foretelling of a future I haven't decided to live. But I smell the darkness in the incense. I trace the tendrils of the incense with forehead firmly within my palm. The streets below are live with persons of little interest, hustling toward a fuller future. Renew me, my qualms. Not that I had qualms, banana-flavored incense replacing patois in my future. The lurid waves slide over my palm. instill a touch of colder interest. With each sandy step, I live. And as the water fills my shoes, I live. When I quietly lose interest the ocean shows it too has qualms. The brine coalesces like incense as my nails dig into the skin of my palm. For I seek a better future than the unforgiving future that chose not to live. The salt stings the holes in my palm and instantly I have no qualms, just a lingering fleck of incense arousing mild interest. The ocean betrayed not the slightest interest being the shepherd of my future. Rivulets of water became the incense That I would breathe to live. Instinct expressed fervent qualms, as I pressed my mouth with my open palm. It was the incense in which I held the most interest. Her finger traced my palm, mumbling of a better future ahead for me to live, free from petty qualms.
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Nov 25, 2010
Nov 25, 2010 at 1:17 AM UTC
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