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The jagged edges of rocks Get smoothened by flowing water Yet, the broken mental edges Cannot be soothed by the flowing emotions Holding on to life, hanging from a precipice Not aware of the surrounding, but mental agony Blurry eyes and senses, leaves you forlorn Donning a black cloak, coalescing with darkness Oblivion beckons with enthusiasm To make you a part of the lonely journey Travelling with a heavy load of denials Yet, the rebuttal, becomes the only truth
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Jul 4, 2014
Jul 4, 2014 at 3:24 AM UTC
Agonized Mind
The jagged edges of rocks Get smoothened by flowing water Yet, the broken mental edges Cannot be soothed by the flowing emotions Holding on to life, hanging from a precipice Not aware of the surrounding, but mental agony Blurry eyes and senses, leaves you forlorn Donning a black cloak, coalescing with darkness Oblivion beckons with enthusiasm To make you a part of the lonely journey Travelling with a heavy load of denials Yet, the rebuttal, becomes the only truth
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Jul 4, 2014
Jul 4, 2014 at 3:24 AM UTC
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