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Crouched down into the corner of a couch Watching the three people around me. Three fingers around me. Pointing. They seem to be talking. The fingers, not the people. As the fingers shake back and forth, In a condescending way, They seem to say, Failure. You can’t do it. You can’t do it. As I sit there feeling smaller than ever These giant fingers won’t stop. Failure. You can’t do it. You can’t do it. It’s a new idea. And I’m too stubborn for it to be true.
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Nov 23, 2010
Nov 23, 2010 at 9:48 PM UTC
The Fingers Fail
Crouched down into the corner of a couch Watching the three people around me. Three fingers around me. Pointing. They seem to be talking. The fingers, not the people. As the fingers shake back and forth, In a condescending way, They seem to say, Failure. You can’t do it. You can’t do it. As I sit there feeling smaller than ever These giant fingers won’t stop. Failure. You can’t do it. You can’t do it. It’s a new idea. And I’m too stubborn for it to be true.
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Nov 23, 2010
Nov 23, 2010 at 9:48 PM UTC
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