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The addictive aroma of Well-aged nostalgia, and a Hurricane-yellow sunset, was Striking from the Western Side. The east, full of forest. It Often goes Unappreciated.  Sat alone, and gritting his teeth Over it, his forehead wet, Losing patience, sweating  Droplets, wiped up by the Dollars you couldn't afford to spend. Outwardly expressing: "Overwhelmed." Born of the burning woods, and  Left to ash, again, with the leaves, the Scent settled, clearly set on Sticking around.  In the mood to bleed, and Drag some metal, through the  Dirt caked on your legs? Filth burns brighter indoors, and my Power's just gone out.  But you cast quite a shadow, when  Lightning interrupts the black.   "Storm'd been on it's way for a while. I'm relieved, it finally hit us.  Fair weather felt dishonest. " Long hair's got a few more days left in it, Bags under his eyes, not quite full,  Intent on the ideal, and Going out on his shield. Decrying the Curse of the Under-employed. Barking beckons him back, and  Beneath his broken heart, beating, Beyond a reasonable doubt,  Buggering on. Exhaustingly enthusiastic.  The howled woofs, and selected drum lines. Droning, diligent,  "And pleased to meet you, darling." He flips open one of his  Boxes, counts to seventeen, and sighs.  Puts a cigarette between his lips.  Lights it. Counts to sixteen, and sighs.  Closes that box, and buys another.  "One third of what he says is nonsense, but When you talk, he listens." And  Love's a vice, he can't help but Nourish. Hiding in fog, and Drowning in his cheap whiskey.  Perfectly cornered, writing a poem about it.
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 3:02 PM UTC
Striking from the Western Side
The addictive aroma of Well-aged nostalgia, and a Hurricane-yellow sunset, was Striking from the Western Side. The east, full of forest. It Often goes Unappreciated.  Sat alone, and gritting his teeth Over it, his forehead wet, Losing patience, sweating  Droplets, wiped up by the Dollars you couldn't afford to spend. Outwardly expressing: "Overwhelmed." Born of the burning woods, and  Left to ash, again, with the leaves, the Scent settled, clearly set on Sticking around.  In the mood to bleed, and Drag some metal, through the  Dirt caked on your legs? Filth burns brighter indoors, and my Power's just gone out.  But you cast quite a shadow, when  Lightning interrupts the black.   "Storm'd been on it's way for a while. I'm relieved, it finally hit us.  Fair weather felt dishonest. " Long hair's got a few more days left in it, Bags under his eyes, not quite full,  Intent on the ideal, and Going out on his shield. Decrying the Curse of the Under-employed. Barking beckons him back, and  Beneath his broken heart, beating, Beyond a reasonable doubt,  Buggering on. Exhaustingly enthusiastic.  The howled woofs, and selected drum lines. Droning, diligent,  "And pleased to meet you, darling." He flips open one of his  Boxes, counts to seventeen, and sighs.  Puts a cigarette between his lips.  Lights it. Counts to sixteen, and sighs.  Closes that box, and buys another.  "One third of what he says is nonsense, but When you talk, he listens." And  Love's a vice, he can't help but Nourish. Hiding in fog, and Drowning in his cheap whiskey.  Perfectly cornered, writing a poem about it.
Very self-referential, but hopefully, also, relatable. I think this may be the best poem I've written. I may revise a little over time.
seanflagstaff
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 3:02 PM UTC
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