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There was once a time where I felt so strongly Within me was an eagerness cradled by a fire that only inexperience could kindle I plunged blindly into the depths of feeling unaware that death lied ahead but o the death did come with it's menacing smoky pain. Paralyzed me like a shock, electricity unexpected and cold Left me dumped in the stagnant waters of struck-down lovers who hadn't quite learned yet Here I float face down and all the wiser
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Jun 26, 2014
Jun 26, 2014 at 8:46 AM UTC
Wise
There was once a time where I felt so strongly Within me was an eagerness cradled by a fire that only inexperience could kindle I plunged blindly into the depths of feeling unaware that death lied ahead but o the death did come with it's menacing smoky pain. Paralyzed me like a shock, electricity unexpected and cold Left me dumped in the stagnant waters of struck-down lovers who hadn't quite learned yet Here I float face down and all the wiser
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Jun 26, 2014
Jun 26, 2014 at 8:46 AM UTC
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