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1.  Sometimes I have conversations with you in my head – “you said there was nothing here” (blue biro) 2. Do you think of me at all? (black pen) 3. You better apologize (black pen, “you didn’t” is added later in blue biro, underlined) 4. I think I’m in a better place (faded blue biro) 5. I hate this (big letters, blue pen, scratched in) 6. I miss you, you idiots (pink pen) 7. I miss you, you idiots (the ‘s’ of idiots crossed out with blue pen) 8. I miss you, you idiot (crossed out entirely, two lines) 9. Why didn’t you notice (pink pen) 10. Do you think you matter to me? (blue biro) 11. I am done with you (black pen, capitals, scratched in)
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Jun 25, 2014
Jun 25, 2014 at 12:53 PM UTC
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1.  Sometimes I have conversations with you in my head – “you said there was nothing here” (blue biro) 2. Do you think of me at all? (black pen) 3. You better apologize (black pen, “you didn’t” is added later in blue biro, underlined) 4. I think I’m in a better place (faded blue biro) 5. I hate this (big letters, blue pen, scratched in) 6. I miss you, you idiots (pink pen) 7. I miss you, you idiots (the ‘s’ of idiots crossed out with blue pen) 8. I miss you, you idiot (crossed out entirely, two lines) 9. Why didn’t you notice (pink pen) 10. Do you think you matter to me? (blue biro) 11. I am done with you (black pen, capitals, scratched in)
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Jun 25, 2014
Jun 25, 2014 at 12:53 PM UTC
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