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For Joshua Haines Thanks for the invite kid, but I am bulky enough and don't need your weight to carry **** good writer you are, not a concede, not an aiming to please, "just the facts, ma'am" not even twenty one commander of the ship from a mooring slipped, a poetic trip well-begun but      Follow for Follow? no babe, passing dude, passed that point of no purposed-return, trading points and placing my self worth on a scale of followers, or ranted counts of page views I  may read you cause write quite nicely, but I don't inflate nobody's ego, for their own fake sake counting false gods got my people forty years of desert wandering, after 400 years of penal servitude, so I have done my hard time, for that exact crime Whew! That felt good! you must of got me confused with another whew I was young once till very recently, even tho I am four decades plus you senior so here is my story, don't swap spit or follows, or likes for show, those who have my heart, have my words freely my audience is the sun, my numerology glorious, the blades of green beneath my rabbits happy bunny dancing, for every verse pleasured those I count on, ask not, for they like me for the who in my poetry, knowing fullness and well, mine is theirs, no need to trade favors I will read your words, but not for you, but for them, the best part of the best of you Let us together, think about that... and if ever there were a blade upon to fall, this notion is both sharp, and the map to freedom good luck to us both...
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Jun 21, 2014
Jun 21, 2014 at 11:05 AM UTC
Follow for Follow?
For Joshua Haines Thanks for the invite kid, but I am bulky enough and don't need your weight to carry **** good writer you are, not a concede, not an aiming to please, "just the facts, ma'am" not even twenty one commander of the ship from a mooring slipped, a poetic trip well-begun but      Follow for Follow? no babe, passing dude, passed that point of no purposed-return, trading points and placing my self worth on a scale of followers, or ranted counts of page views I  may read you cause write quite nicely, but I don't inflate nobody's ego, for their own fake sake counting false gods got my people forty years of desert wandering, after 400 years of penal servitude, so I have done my hard time, for that exact crime Whew! That felt good! you must of got me confused with another whew I was young once till very recently, even tho I am four decades plus you senior so here is my story, don't swap spit or follows, or likes for show, those who have my heart, have my words freely my audience is the sun, my numerology glorious, the blades of green beneath my rabbits happy bunny dancing, for every verse pleasured those I count on, ask not, for they like me for the who in my poetry, knowing fullness and well, mine is theirs, no need to trade favors I will read your words, but not for you, but for them, the best part of the best of you Let us together, think about that... and if ever there were a blade upon to fall, this notion is both sharp, and the map to freedom good luck to us both...
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Jun 21, 2014
Jun 21, 2014 at 11:05 AM UTC
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