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Like an unyielding wave of emotion and ecstasy, mysterious perplexity, left breathlessly astonished by this sensation of unidentified bliss. Dumbfounded and taken aback there isn't a crack in this wall of love that emerges from a light, this is not a feeling I would ever fight fueling these intense impulses and mind boggling feelings each layer of this flower petal is peeling It is concrete, this love a stone set certainty aimed for the stars, blood pumping wind gusts and fast paced cars. This inexplicable sureness floats in the streams of twisting dreams dancing in my head painting each wall red. intuition at it's finest, for there is no mistake every corner of this world would quake if what I'm saying did not deem true. It is concrete, this love nor a fantasy or an illusion, I will never be freed of, this concrete love.
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Jun 20, 2014
Jun 20, 2014 at 8:08 PM UTC
Concrete
Like an unyielding wave of emotion and ecstasy, mysterious perplexity, left breathlessly astonished by this sensation of unidentified bliss. Dumbfounded and taken aback there isn't a crack in this wall of love that emerges from a light, this is not a feeling I would ever fight fueling these intense impulses and mind boggling feelings each layer of this flower petal is peeling It is concrete, this love a stone set certainty aimed for the stars, blood pumping wind gusts and fast paced cars. This inexplicable sureness floats in the streams of twisting dreams dancing in my head painting each wall red. intuition at it's finest, for there is no mistake every corner of this world would quake if what I'm saying did not deem true. It is concrete, this love nor a fantasy or an illusion, I will never be freed of, this concrete love.
rosegarden
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Jun 20, 2014
Jun 20, 2014 at 8:08 PM UTC
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