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Staring at the night sky. Back to the asphalt, waiting. The stars are dimmed by a thin cloud smattering hanging above relentlessly, the result of a windless evening. Only here on a lampless island could you see through to the stars. The water laps rhythmically against the dockside. Consistent. Reassuring. It seems I’ve been out here forever awaiting my shooting star. Irritating clouds matched with crisp night air, make the search troublesome. It’d be irrational to wait much longer. Reconsidering. Then she tears across the midnight sky. Brilliant and promising. Perhaps the brightest one yet. I’ve never been a man for wishes, but I have an urge to make one right now.
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Nov 17, 2010
Nov 17, 2010 at 7:38 AM UTC
Patience
Staring at the night sky. Back to the asphalt, waiting. The stars are dimmed by a thin cloud smattering hanging above relentlessly, the result of a windless evening. Only here on a lampless island could you see through to the stars. The water laps rhythmically against the dockside. Consistent. Reassuring. It seems I’ve been out here forever awaiting my shooting star. Irritating clouds matched with crisp night air, make the search troublesome. It’d be irrational to wait much longer. Reconsidering. Then she tears across the midnight sky. Brilliant and promising. Perhaps the brightest one yet. I’ve never been a man for wishes, but I have an urge to make one right now.
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Nov 17, 2010
Nov 17, 2010 at 7:38 AM UTC
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