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if everyone cared and no on cried if everyone loved and no one lied if everyone shared and swallowed their pride then we'd see the day where nobody dies
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Jun 18, 2014
Jun 18, 2014 at 6:12 PM UTC
nobody dies
if everyone cared and no on cried if everyone loved and no one lied if everyone shared and swallowed their pride then we'd see the day where nobody dies
Second line 'and no on(E) cried' Watch the spelling, sometimes it can change the whole meaning of what you are trying to get across. Awesome poem by the way!
DarkKnight
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Jun 18, 2014
Jun 18, 2014 at 6:12 PM UTC
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