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I met a man with a Y for a hand. Addressed him timidly, "which war?" An earnest reply: "the second." He then went on. His words were water, gently flooding my mind. 'O pliant paper sea, kindly permit those words to flow from me and into Thee!' For I fear I may drown, held under too long by the rapids I have become. This is my stranger, the moments he shared: 'Father gone, too young to forgive. The neighbor boy's '41 Buick leaves dust on his new bicycle. Upon a cinder track, Father's fleeing footsteps spur him on, For his is a sadness only speed can overcome. I know not by what good grace he 'scaped savage Okinawa, with her Endless line of bayonets, but I do know this: That cinder track, in devotion absolute, forgot its form, stretching from an Imperfect oval to a path at once straight and serpentine, leading you from foxhole to foxhole, past ambush and anguish. No victory lap here; just heavy iron tread snapping shoots of bamboo spread for a finish line. Silence and silence alone greets him as he collapses post-race, leaving three fingers to Okinawa and departing post-haste.' I had all but succumbed to his tale, each new sentence a towering breaker Pummeling me into the darkness of my aquatic consciousness. I reached out, finding a precious grasp extracting me from jealous eddies and Lonely currents. Though our handshake held seven where ten should rightly go, it was yet more complete than any I have known.
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Jun 14, 2014
Jun 14, 2014 at 8:31 PM UTC
Seven
I met a man with a Y for a hand. Addressed him timidly, "which war?" An earnest reply: "the second." He then went on. His words were water, gently flooding my mind. 'O pliant paper sea, kindly permit those words to flow from me and into Thee!' For I fear I may drown, held under too long by the rapids I have become. This is my stranger, the moments he shared: 'Father gone, too young to forgive. The neighbor boy's '41 Buick leaves dust on his new bicycle. Upon a cinder track, Father's fleeing footsteps spur him on, For his is a sadness only speed can overcome. I know not by what good grace he 'scaped savage Okinawa, with her Endless line of bayonets, but I do know this: That cinder track, in devotion absolute, forgot its form, stretching from an Imperfect oval to a path at once straight and serpentine, leading you from foxhole to foxhole, past ambush and anguish. No victory lap here; just heavy iron tread snapping shoots of bamboo spread for a finish line. Silence and silence alone greets him as he collapses post-race, leaving three fingers to Okinawa and departing post-haste.' I had all but succumbed to his tale, each new sentence a towering breaker Pummeling me into the darkness of my aquatic consciousness. I reached out, finding a precious grasp extracting me from jealous eddies and Lonely currents. Though our handshake held seven where ten should rightly go, it was yet more complete than any I have known.
kevin-gish
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Jun 14, 2014
Jun 14, 2014 at 8:31 PM UTC
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