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Roses are red, jasmines are white. Flowers touch a woman's heart. Once misled, you will not go right. Knowing much, you won't part. Rain falling down,kids running all around. River running wild, do not get washed away. A stranger in another town, his kindness does not count. Don't act like a child, help others find a way. On a friend to lean, he is so bold. Friendship means the whole world.
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Nov 15, 2010
Nov 15, 2010 at 3:46 AM UTC
A Pantun of An Old Friend
Roses are red, jasmines are white. Flowers touch a woman's heart. Once misled, you will not go right. Knowing much, you won't part. Rain falling down,kids running all around. River running wild, do not get washed away. A stranger in another town, his kindness does not count. Don't act like a child, help others find a way. On a friend to lean, he is so bold. Friendship means the whole world.
Pantun is a malay poetic form. it is a four-lined verse consisting of alternating, roughly rhyming lines. The first and second lines sometimes appear completely disconnected in meaning from the third and fourth, but there is almost invariably a link of some sort.
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Nov 15, 2010
Nov 15, 2010 at 3:46 AM UTC
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