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The oar reflects and 
 Casts a shadow on the thick red
 Swelling lake, 
 Thick with time gone and 
Nights past. 
 Thick with my hands 
 Loose and deft; stained now 
 With a momentary solution
 To a mountain of problems. Mountains are formed when
 Two great stones collide 
 And push in against each other
 Reaching up and up and 
 Up until the clouds are daggered 
 And snow falls asleep towards the peak. My hand makes waves and
 In it’s rippling wake 
I feel myself die
 I feel myself wince
 I feel my bed beneath my feet 
Rich with sulfur and stone 
 Straightening out my back
 It’s good for my back because
 I’m always aching from the weight
 Of two stones slowly colliding
 In my thick stupid skull 
 Always full of rippling red lakes.
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Jun 12, 2014
Jun 12, 2014 at 2:02 PM UTC
Red and Climbing
The oar reflects and 
 Casts a shadow on the thick red
 Swelling lake, 
 Thick with time gone and 
Nights past. 
 Thick with my hands 
 Loose and deft; stained now 
 With a momentary solution
 To a mountain of problems. Mountains are formed when
 Two great stones collide 
 And push in against each other
 Reaching up and up and 
 Up until the clouds are daggered 
 And snow falls asleep towards the peak. My hand makes waves and
 In it’s rippling wake 
I feel myself die
 I feel myself wince
 I feel my bed beneath my feet 
Rich with sulfur and stone 
 Straightening out my back
 It’s good for my back because
 I’m always aching from the weight
 Of two stones slowly colliding
 In my thick stupid skull 
 Always full of rippling red lakes.
jeremyeckl
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Jun 12, 2014
Jun 12, 2014 at 2:02 PM UTC
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