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puritans hath been saying that Dan stepped over the line by using an expletive which was not attractive nor fine by Dan employing that particular form of phrase he was attempting to give the poem a brighter glaze whatever device of poetry Dan needs to put in place is okay if it doesn't cause him a scintilla of disgrace those who are pulling Dan to pieces for his specifics may need to look at their out dated type of linguistics for goodness sake stop giving Dan a grilling as he's only doing his best to make his verses more thrilling
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Jun 12, 2014
Jun 12, 2014 at 8:27 AM UTC
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puritans hath been saying that Dan stepped over the line by using an expletive which was not attractive nor fine by Dan employing that particular form of phrase he was attempting to give the poem a brighter glaze whatever device of poetry Dan needs to put in place is okay if it doesn't cause him a scintilla of disgrace those who are pulling Dan to pieces for his specifics may need to look at their out dated type of linguistics for goodness sake stop giving Dan a grilling as he's only doing his best to make his verses more thrilling
ElizabethSquires
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Jun 12, 2014
Jun 12, 2014 at 8:27 AM UTC
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