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I trace your faded prints upon the dirt around them, mud congeals to form my hurt failing falling stars confuse my path I shuffle feet for miles but stay inert all false the trails refusing to subvert antipathetic strands to stir my wrath The trees all flay themselves to spill the secrets thou swore undying oath to never keepest lest all worlds align to hide the truth Pausing, taking breaths beneath the deepest floors of pits that tenderly would keep us undestined, lost and wild to know our youth And seek you out I must, I must, I will, at universe's end, a galaxy where we would rest, reborn; become, to be where every breath relaxes into still Ever will you walk alone, until you witness me in my entirety Come, my unforgotten one, you see arrival less one is a bitter pill
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Jun 9, 2014
Jun 9, 2014 at 4:30 PM UTC
wither thou goest ( co- write with Joel M Frye)
I trace your faded prints upon the dirt around them, mud congeals to form my hurt failing falling stars confuse my path I shuffle feet for miles but stay inert all false the trails refusing to subvert antipathetic strands to stir my wrath The trees all flay themselves to spill the secrets thou swore undying oath to never keepest lest all worlds align to hide the truth Pausing, taking breaths beneath the deepest floors of pits that tenderly would keep us undestined, lost and wild to know our youth And seek you out I must, I must, I will, at universe's end, a galaxy where we would rest, reborn; become, to be where every breath relaxes into still Ever will you walk alone, until you witness me in my entirety Come, my unforgotten one, you see arrival less one is a bitter pill
My attention was grabbed by Dante's sonnet variation; true story is I got my knickers in a twist because I couldn't make it work and threw it into the woods where luckily a very smart bear was able to claw it into a work of art :) Thank you Bear :)
helen
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Jun 9, 2014
Jun 9, 2014 at 4:30 PM UTC
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