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Its Friday and school is ended Home we run, both trying to win the race to the garden gate Hot and red faced, my brother beats me by an inch I tell myself "I let him touch the post before me" Into weekend scruffs we climb, piles of school clothes left behind For mum to gather, washing to be done My brother and I have something more important to do We need to make sure they are ready And they are, all washed and clean and ready for 7-0'clock When the pop van comes. 4 empty bottles, waiting to be handed back and reborn 4 empty bottles, worth 5p each off the next ones! 4 empty bottles to exchange for 4 full But what will we choose When the pop van comes ? 7-0'clock 4 bottles, 2 each We march to where the van full of wonderful fizziness will stop My brother and I stand in line, there are children all around with their bottles too All waiting for their turn to swap 1 empty for one full with 5p off! When the pop van comes My brother chooses first as he beat me to the gate (I let him win) Raspberryade! Now me, Shandy please, (I like to pretend its beer) Finally mum joins us and chooses orangeade and a bottle of dandelion and burdock for dad We take back our bottles, excited, thirsty, Into the glass I pour my 'beer' Glug glug, glug, glug, fizzzzzzzzzzzzz, gulp, gulp, gulp, gulp, gulp. Too much! Bubbles tickle my tongue, I lose my breath, too fizzy Buuuuuuurp! I love it when the pop van comes
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Jun 5, 2014
Jun 5, 2014 at 8:21 AM UTC
POP VAN
Its Friday and school is ended Home we run, both trying to win the race to the garden gate Hot and red faced, my brother beats me by an inch I tell myself "I let him touch the post before me" Into weekend scruffs we climb, piles of school clothes left behind For mum to gather, washing to be done My brother and I have something more important to do We need to make sure they are ready And they are, all washed and clean and ready for 7-0'clock When the pop van comes. 4 empty bottles, waiting to be handed back and reborn 4 empty bottles, worth 5p each off the next ones! 4 empty bottles to exchange for 4 full But what will we choose When the pop van comes ? 7-0'clock 4 bottles, 2 each We march to where the van full of wonderful fizziness will stop My brother and I stand in line, there are children all around with their bottles too All waiting for their turn to swap 1 empty for one full with 5p off! When the pop van comes My brother chooses first as he beat me to the gate (I let him win) Raspberryade! Now me, Shandy please, (I like to pretend its beer) Finally mum joins us and chooses orangeade and a bottle of dandelion and burdock for dad We take back our bottles, excited, thirsty, Into the glass I pour my 'beer' Glug glug, glug, glug, fizzzzzzzzzzzzz, gulp, gulp, gulp, gulp, gulp. Too much! Bubbles tickle my tongue, I lose my breath, too fizzy Buuuuuuurp! I love it when the pop van comes
Do you remember the pop van? Its just another one of those memories that has stuck with me. x
manda-clement
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Jun 5, 2014
Jun 5, 2014 at 8:21 AM UTC
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