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Whilst lingering in a hell bound past and making uncomfortable use of your smile I redeem myself ----- before pale flashes of the visions you encounter and wishes of the rose garden blooming in winter you come to see the harsh reality ----- no given reason will come nor foreign obstacles to your daily redemption and a surprisingly valuable scenery reminds you of these times ----- setting yourself up as a negative ploy for but the upmost gravely feelings and destined an unpatched fate your mind is empty and your soul drops dead -----
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 4:05 AM UTC
Farsighted Fates
Whilst lingering in a hell bound past and making uncomfortable use of your smile I redeem myself ----- before pale flashes of the visions you encounter and wishes of the rose garden blooming in winter you come to see the harsh reality ----- no given reason will come nor foreign obstacles to your daily redemption and a surprisingly valuable scenery reminds you of these times ----- setting yourself up as a negative ploy for but the upmost gravely feelings and destined an unpatched fate your mind is empty and your soul drops dead -----
caitie
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 4:05 AM UTC
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