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Modern man stood-- Looking towards the horizon, seeing the past. The red blood of a thousand dying sunsets colored his face in ghosts. Unmindful of the Tears flowing freely man lifts its hand to reach out-- Native spirits of a desolate world cast their gazes away and toward the ground.
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Jun 2, 2014
Jun 2, 2014 at 1:47 PM UTC
Freeman
Modern man stood-- Looking towards the horizon, seeing the past. The red blood of a thousand dying sunsets colored his face in ghosts. Unmindful of the Tears flowing freely man lifts its hand to reach out-- Native spirits of a desolate world cast their gazes away and toward the ground.
This is a work in progress.  I like the imagery and simplicity, but it still feels really rough.
pete-badertscher
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Jun 2, 2014
Jun 2, 2014 at 1:47 PM UTC
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