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I traverse these curses like a standoffish simile writing i still luv u, k? to metaphors torn between your reality and mine. The simple pirouette of "less is more" Is itself a palimpsest When you are you. My deep divers fail to resurface. Truth. Instead of being alongside you -- Apart yet with you -- I am stupidly fixed on being all the way inside you -- Bodies twisted and twisting, as your thighs ride into hips, and mine into necks, gaunt, spent, hung.
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Jun 2, 2014
Jun 2, 2014 at 1:15 PM UTC
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I traverse these curses like a standoffish simile writing i still luv u, k? to metaphors torn between your reality and mine. The simple pirouette of "less is more" Is itself a palimpsest When you are you. My deep divers fail to resurface. Truth. Instead of being alongside you -- Apart yet with you -- I am stupidly fixed on being all the way inside you -- Bodies twisted and twisting, as your thighs ride into hips, and mine into necks, gaunt, spent, hung.
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Jun 2, 2014
Jun 2, 2014 at 1:15 PM UTC
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