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What beautiful little words You spread across the page As if this call for empathy Could dispel your rage What dainty little lies You whisper in my ear As if this pause for apathy Somehow negates your fear What delicate little souls You lead onto the ice As if your hindsight sympathies Could currently suffice
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Nov 9, 2010
Nov 9, 2010 at 6:56 PM UTC
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What beautiful little words You spread across the page As if this call for empathy Could dispel your rage What dainty little lies You whisper in my ear As if this pause for apathy Somehow negates your fear What delicate little souls You lead onto the ice As if your hindsight sympathies Could currently suffice
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Nov 9, 2010
Nov 9, 2010 at 6:56 PM UTC
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