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mum asks *why you show your poems to strangers but not to me?* mum doesn't know poetry is light but it can also be darkness sometimes it is mostly darkness and poetry is history and experiences and things you want to happen and things you don't want to see poetry isn't always chocolate-filled with a coat of sugar it isn't always pretty metaphors and nice descriptions of nice feelings mum doesn't know my poems can turn a little darker twisted just like my mind and she doesn't know the way I love or the way I hate and she would surely ask and she would surely know who and why and what and strangers don't know who the hell I am talking about and they don't care as long as they read a good piece mum asks I don't reply.
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May 29, 2014
May 29, 2014 at 8:55 PM UTC
it is said mum knows best
mum asks *why you show your poems to strangers but not to me?* mum doesn't know poetry is light but it can also be darkness sometimes it is mostly darkness and poetry is history and experiences and things you want to happen and things you don't want to see poetry isn't always chocolate-filled with a coat of sugar it isn't always pretty metaphors and nice descriptions of nice feelings mum doesn't know my poems can turn a little darker twisted just like my mind and she doesn't know the way I love or the way I hate and she would surely ask and she would surely know who and why and what and strangers don't know who the hell I am talking about and they don't care as long as they read a good piece mum asks I don't reply.
Well, mum hasn't asked... yet. Most of my friends actually did.
alda-jacob
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May 29, 2014
May 29, 2014 at 8:55 PM UTC
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