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the folded man sat creasing the edges of his wallet sized heart and stared off into the romantic night full of lovers embracing and others who silently wished for a hand to hold he waited for her soft footsteps but she just sat in her bedroom mirror brushing her hair thinking of some boy from long ago sundown was just that kind of girl trade your temptations today for the empty promise of yesterday she will stay here another season maybe he will pass this way maybe the storm clouds gathering will go away the harlots all dance with unacquainted tenderness not all embraces are done with joy call it a sundown's choice cause its a bad one and the gambler brushes dust off his neat appearances each detail of his solitude lie must be cared for lest it crumble and expose hes just a green kid from illinois we all put the best face we can some just take it too far she went to the picture show and looked for familiar faces in the crowded hall but the folded man had already slipped away with one of the harlots who will make a pretty bride someday everybody gets a second chance they just may not want it once they get it she brushed the ashes from her clothes they fell like thin snowfall on spring day a last taste of winters hand out of the burnt shell of the dancehall at dawn we came the thick smoke splayed out on the thin wind wound its way past catching the dust and making the sunlight a dull brown she looked at me with tears for eyes asked me to take her from this place everybody gets a second chance they just may not want it once they get it
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Jun 1, 2014
Jun 1, 2014 at 3:44 PM UTC
sundown for the foolish
the folded man sat creasing the edges of his wallet sized heart and stared off into the romantic night full of lovers embracing and others who silently wished for a hand to hold he waited for her soft footsteps but she just sat in her bedroom mirror brushing her hair thinking of some boy from long ago sundown was just that kind of girl trade your temptations today for the empty promise of yesterday she will stay here another season maybe he will pass this way maybe the storm clouds gathering will go away the harlots all dance with unacquainted tenderness not all embraces are done with joy call it a sundown's choice cause its a bad one and the gambler brushes dust off his neat appearances each detail of his solitude lie must be cared for lest it crumble and expose hes just a green kid from illinois we all put the best face we can some just take it too far she went to the picture show and looked for familiar faces in the crowded hall but the folded man had already slipped away with one of the harlots who will make a pretty bride someday everybody gets a second chance they just may not want it once they get it she brushed the ashes from her clothes they fell like thin snowfall on spring day a last taste of winters hand out of the burnt shell of the dancehall at dawn we came the thick smoke splayed out on the thin wind wound its way past catching the dust and making the sunlight a dull brown she looked at me with tears for eyes asked me to take her from this place everybody gets a second chance they just may not want it once they get it
(her name, what the hell was her name...something childish like tranquility)
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Jun 1, 2014
Jun 1, 2014 at 3:44 PM UTC
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