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*We part ways, & the paths that we take Lead us back to each other Oh, how I suffer, My rediscovered lover Won't you please smother me? Every time we say we're done We'll still return for one more bump, Take a bad hit of our drug Then run back like addicts So let's give this one last try While my lantern oil runs dry & I run aimlessly in the dark Trying to find you Pensive, I stare into this hourglass Remissive, and reminiscent of forgotten ever after effervescently iridescent Like flowing light observed through a prismastic prison As my grasp slips, sand will filter between my fingertips And Ill swear with every falling grain Someday they'll meet and create a famous work of art putting even Mona Lisa to shame; Forged in the flames, of our eternal love But in the blink of an eye, I'm buried; Cemented in the sediment of time Oh how I wish you'd carry me to the brink Just one last instance, so I can feel alive again While **f r e e f a l l i n g** through meaningless semi-existence*
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May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
Such Love, Once Lost
*We part ways, & the paths that we take Lead us back to each other Oh, how I suffer, My rediscovered lover Won't you please smother me? Every time we say we're done We'll still return for one more bump, Take a bad hit of our drug Then run back like addicts So let's give this one last try While my lantern oil runs dry & I run aimlessly in the dark Trying to find you Pensive, I stare into this hourglass Remissive, and reminiscent of forgotten ever after effervescently iridescent Like flowing light observed through a prismastic prison As my grasp slips, sand will filter between my fingertips And Ill swear with every falling grain Someday they'll meet and create a famous work of art putting even Mona Lisa to shame; Forged in the flames, of our eternal love But in the blink of an eye, I'm buried; Cemented in the sediment of time Oh how I wish you'd carry me to the brink Just one last instance, so I can feel alive again While **f r e e f a l l i n g** through meaningless semi-existence*
I actually just rediscovered an early draft of this written in December 2010. Felt this deserved to be finished. The title is a sort of combination of the phrases "Such love" and "love once lost"
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May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 5:58 AM UTC
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