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Today I walked across the street with my eyes closed just to see if I was really meant to be here and of course, again I go unnoticed no longer do I know who I am never have I felt so lost, so lost and confused I don’t know what is right, and what is wrong God how I wish you would make me feel as if I belonged so lost and confused still looking for my purpose in life, right now feels as though I don’t have one but I’m still looking for that reason to believe cause nothing makes you feel more alive than feeling your bones break from that bone shattering impact of a car in traffic just watching the blood drip from your open veins God please give me a reason right now it feels as if I should give up I wouldn’t wish this feeling, upon my greatest enemy where are you God? I don't feel you, I don’t see you, I don’t hear you, I dreamt of falling so great the feeling of life you don’t feel more alive then the moment in life, where death can arise the rush I need comes from life threatening events God why do you hate me? I know I am no angel but do I really deserve this pain? It aches when I breathe, choking on my own words, I wish they hit me I wish I felt alive I want to feel the impact, I want to feel those broken bones I want to see that scarlet drip God what did I do to make you hate me?
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Nov 4, 2010
Nov 4, 2010 at 2:29 PM UTC
The inevitability of Life
Today I walked across the street with my eyes closed just to see if I was really meant to be here and of course, again I go unnoticed no longer do I know who I am never have I felt so lost, so lost and confused I don’t know what is right, and what is wrong God how I wish you would make me feel as if I belonged so lost and confused still looking for my purpose in life, right now feels as though I don’t have one but I’m still looking for that reason to believe cause nothing makes you feel more alive than feeling your bones break from that bone shattering impact of a car in traffic just watching the blood drip from your open veins God please give me a reason right now it feels as if I should give up I wouldn’t wish this feeling, upon my greatest enemy where are you God? I don't feel you, I don’t see you, I don’t hear you, I dreamt of falling so great the feeling of life you don’t feel more alive then the moment in life, where death can arise the rush I need comes from life threatening events God why do you hate me? I know I am no angel but do I really deserve this pain? It aches when I breathe, choking on my own words, I wish they hit me I wish I felt alive I want to feel the impact, I want to feel those broken bones I want to see that scarlet drip God what did I do to make you hate me?
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Nov 4, 2010
Nov 4, 2010 at 2:29 PM UTC
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