She said to me she liked my suit but...
"Bite your tongue" I replied
She said "but no I only meant..."
"I don't need your approval" I lied
"It really is quite nice" she whispered
her face now red with shame
"Like it or not, I hardly care
to me it's all the same"
I walked away with head held high
but feeling oh so bad
why had I uttered these angry words
and made her look so sad
Was it the disappointment
that she hadn't oohed and aahed
after the time I had spent choosing
were my feelings so on guard
I'd wanted her to be proud of me
and give me so much praise
but as usual the "but" was added
it was always there these days
So my defensive ego reared up
and had bitten her in spite
criticism I couldn't take
and my nerves told me to fight
Scream at the World and be ******
my inner self did shout
as tears now rolled down my face
while I looked for a way out
Taking my courage in both hands
I turned and wiped my eyes
"Forgive me please I'm sorry
for emitting all those lies"
"It's my love of all things you
that has made me highly strung
I only wish that I'd been silent
and bitten my own tongue"
She looked at me with sadness
and then turned her head away
"Goodbye you ******* ******
was all I heard her say
The End.
May 21, 2014
May 21, 2014 at 2:00 PM UTC
She said to me she liked my suit but...
"Bite your tongue" I replied
She said "but no I only meant..."
"I don't need your approval" I lied
"It really is quite nice" she whispered
her face now red with shame
"Like it or not, I hardly care
to me it's all the same"
I walked away with head held high
but feeling oh so bad
why had I uttered these angry words
and made her look so sad
Was it the disappointment
that she hadn't oohed and aahed
after the time I had spent choosing
were my feelings so on guard
I'd wanted her to be proud of me
and give me so much praise
but as usual the "but" was added
it was always there these days
So my defensive ego reared up
and had bitten her in spite
criticism I couldn't take
and my nerves told me to fight
Scream at the World and be ******
my inner self did shout
as tears now rolled down my face
while I looked for a way out
Taking my courage in both hands
I turned and wiped my eyes
"Forgive me please I'm sorry
for emitting all those lies"
"It's my love of all things you
that has made me highly strung
I only wish that I'd been silent
and bitten my own tongue"
She looked at me with sadness
and then turned her head away
"Goodbye you ******* ******
was all I heard her say
The End.
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