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all you had to do was take that little look from me or rather more give me that look of yours come with me cause you know you can come with me cause you know you should I ask you too cause I know you wouldnt so they say that sometimes things are better left half done no matter how far I push the ice I will never feel like I'm half way there outside the old bar I smelt the alcohol in your breath when you told me you never wanted to say it and then you let it go you broke free and thats when I turned around and decided to leave everything behind me including you my hand slowly slipped off the back of your wet neck as I walked away I leaned against the light pole something classical faintly playing in the background and I'm thinking to myself I'm never going to forget this day I know your still standing behind me watching me I yelled inside my head you will hate yourself for this but I didnt turn back I stuck the needles in all the right places and stuck the warmth in all the wrong places and my end result was a bleeding soul with no guidance from that smile I needed desperatley just water from the clouds falling down falling down
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Nov 2, 2010
Nov 2, 2010 at 8:43 PM UTC
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all you had to do was take that little look from me or rather more give me that look of yours come with me cause you know you can come with me cause you know you should I ask you too cause I know you wouldnt so they say that sometimes things are better left half done no matter how far I push the ice I will never feel like I'm half way there outside the old bar I smelt the alcohol in your breath when you told me you never wanted to say it and then you let it go you broke free and thats when I turned around and decided to leave everything behind me including you my hand slowly slipped off the back of your wet neck as I walked away I leaned against the light pole something classical faintly playing in the background and I'm thinking to myself I'm never going to forget this day I know your still standing behind me watching me I yelled inside my head you will hate yourself for this but I didnt turn back I stuck the needles in all the right places and stuck the warmth in all the wrong places and my end result was a bleeding soul with no guidance from that smile I needed desperatley just water from the clouds falling down falling down
midnight-prague
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Nov 2, 2010
Nov 2, 2010 at 8:43 PM UTC
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