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i am nine and learning by osmosis secret women's business or the art of  pie making production line style to the uniniated i sit perched on a stool in the corner, out of the way boxed in by fruit it is a heady place to be as scents of apricots(bought) blackberries and apples mingle sweet woody and exotic, with the citrus tang of  zested lemon that sits in an ever growing pryamid on the table. ginger and cinnamon motes float in the oven warm air and flour clouds the room and settless in drifts and dusts the collection of bowls on the table my mother aunt and mrs blunt,the neighbor, bustle about the room.... my aunts girth designates her as chief baker and she rolls out pastry with gusto...fat arms swinging penduously, humming to herself. mrs blunt is the pie filler adept at judging the mix and making the gelatonious gooey syrups filled with sugar and spice, chopped crab apple and lemon zest. mother is the friuter, she peels destones and cores chopping up apples, apricots and peaches... leaving berries and cherries intact(sans pips) and then later she mans the ovens   watching for the golden crust and bubble of pie juice... before removing them to cool on poppa jacks old oval dining table... me I sit in wonder, snacking on fruit, and balls of leftover dough swooning with the smell of stewing friut. Next year my true apprenticeship will start.... Until then, I listen to the murmer of gossip the passing of secrets, the bonding of these women....
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Apr 7, 2016
Apr 7, 2016 at 5:00 AM UTC
baking day
i am nine and learning by osmosis secret women's business or the art of  pie making production line style to the uniniated i sit perched on a stool in the corner, out of the way boxed in by fruit it is a heady place to be as scents of apricots(bought) blackberries and apples mingle sweet woody and exotic, with the citrus tang of  zested lemon that sits in an ever growing pryamid on the table. ginger and cinnamon motes float in the oven warm air and flour clouds the room and settless in drifts and dusts the collection of bowls on the table my mother aunt and mrs blunt,the neighbor, bustle about the room.... my aunts girth designates her as chief baker and she rolls out pastry with gusto...fat arms swinging penduously, humming to herself. mrs blunt is the pie filler adept at judging the mix and making the gelatonious gooey syrups filled with sugar and spice, chopped crab apple and lemon zest. mother is the friuter, she peels destones and cores chopping up apples, apricots and peaches... leaving berries and cherries intact(sans pips) and then later she mans the ovens   watching for the golden crust and bubble of pie juice... before removing them to cool on poppa jacks old oval dining table... me I sit in wonder, snacking on fruit, and balls of leftover dough swooning with the smell of stewing friut. Next year my true apprenticeship will start.... Until then, I listen to the murmer of gossip the passing of secrets, the bonding of these women....
betterdays
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F/Australian
Apr 7, 2016
Apr 7, 2016 at 5:00 AM UTC
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