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The Mermaid (Part One) The evening was cool and the sky was so clear And ripples of waves were all I could hear The moon shone bright and stars twinkled on high Then from out of nowhere came so seductive a sigh I looked out to sea to whence this sound came And my eyes did believe they were playing a game For as waves lapped around a rock out at sea I saw a beautiful vision who was staring at me Naked as love she sat all alone On that rising edifice of black granite stone Her body so wondrous that I shook with such lust But a smile so pure that my thoughts were unjust Her hair was entangled with luscious green kelp That protected her modesty without man-made help It hung down over ******* so excitingly full And covered the parts that are made to enthral My mind quickly taken by this girl of my dreams But as I looked closer all was not as it seems For legs this beauty was completely bereft And a long fishy tail was all she had left Then with a smile that made my heart still She slipped into the water and I saw she was real For she dived like a dolphin under azure sea And all that was left were the ripples and me The End........or is it? The Mermaid (Part Two) The man with the tear soaked eyes walked along the beach for the thousandth time, his hands were shaking and his lips quivering in the cold, he constantly looked out to sea, where was she, would she ever return, would she mend his broken heart. He had but caught a fleeting glimpse of this beauty as she preened herself on that ancient granite rock, but a glimpse was all it had taken; he was completely besotted by this angel from the deep. Even now, weeks after the event he could still see every tiny detail of his wondrous vision, the sparkling brown eyes that outshone the sun, and the kelp entangled hair that seemed to be alive with light and glistened with the reflection from the moon. Her heaving ******* that had caused the man in him to want her body for his own ****** pleasures, and that oh so innocent smile that had replaced the pure animal lust within him with a more protective desire to take her in his arms and cherish her. He had not kept her appearance a secret, he had told everyone he had met, and he had talked and talked and talked. He wanted to tell everyone about his dream girl, his mermaid from the deep, his beautiful fish tailed siren. But would they listen to him? The answer was no, a resounding no. He was laughed at, ridiculed, pointed at and made out to be the village idiot, just because he wanted to share what he had seen. But he didn’t care, he would see her again, he knew he would see her again; he had to see her again, otherwise, well otherwise he would go crazy. Another tear ran down his face as he once again looked at the vacant rock where his angel had once sat and realised that maybe they were right, maybe he was mad, just a demented old fool, someone that had let his dreams overtake reality. His heart wrenched tear fell to the sand and along with his hopes and dreams soaked into nothingness; He turned away and looked no more, he must preserve his sanity at all costs so he walked away and returned to the boredom of his sad uneventful life. So he was not there an hour later when a ripple formed in the water as a dream like beauty pulled herself from the sea and perched on her favourite granite rock. She looked around, but he was not there, maybe it was her imagination but she was sure she had seen love in his eyes, maybe if she waited he would return, but no, she was being foolish, she slipped off the rock once more and plunged deep into the dark forbidding sea, back to reality she told herself, back in the water where nobody could see her tears. The End
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May 19, 2014
May 19, 2014 at 2:51 PM UTC
The Mermaid (Parts 1 & 2)
The Mermaid (Part One) The evening was cool and the sky was so clear And ripples of waves were all I could hear The moon shone bright and stars twinkled on high Then from out of nowhere came so seductive a sigh I looked out to sea to whence this sound came And my eyes did believe they were playing a game For as waves lapped around a rock out at sea I saw a beautiful vision who was staring at me Naked as love she sat all alone On that rising edifice of black granite stone Her body so wondrous that I shook with such lust But a smile so pure that my thoughts were unjust Her hair was entangled with luscious green kelp That protected her modesty without man-made help It hung down over ******* so excitingly full And covered the parts that are made to enthral My mind quickly taken by this girl of my dreams But as I looked closer all was not as it seems For legs this beauty was completely bereft And a long fishy tail was all she had left Then with a smile that made my heart still She slipped into the water and I saw she was real For she dived like a dolphin under azure sea And all that was left were the ripples and me The End........or is it? The Mermaid (Part Two) The man with the tear soaked eyes walked along the beach for the thousandth time, his hands were shaking and his lips quivering in the cold, he constantly looked out to sea, where was she, would she ever return, would she mend his broken heart. He had but caught a fleeting glimpse of this beauty as she preened herself on that ancient granite rock, but a glimpse was all it had taken; he was completely besotted by this angel from the deep. Even now, weeks after the event he could still see every tiny detail of his wondrous vision, the sparkling brown eyes that outshone the sun, and the kelp entangled hair that seemed to be alive with light and glistened with the reflection from the moon. Her heaving ******* that had caused the man in him to want her body for his own ****** pleasures, and that oh so innocent smile that had replaced the pure animal lust within him with a more protective desire to take her in his arms and cherish her. He had not kept her appearance a secret, he had told everyone he had met, and he had talked and talked and talked. He wanted to tell everyone about his dream girl, his mermaid from the deep, his beautiful fish tailed siren. But would they listen to him? The answer was no, a resounding no. He was laughed at, ridiculed, pointed at and made out to be the village idiot, just because he wanted to share what he had seen. But he didn’t care, he would see her again, he knew he would see her again; he had to see her again, otherwise, well otherwise he would go crazy. Another tear ran down his face as he once again looked at the vacant rock where his angel had once sat and realised that maybe they were right, maybe he was mad, just a demented old fool, someone that had let his dreams overtake reality. His heart wrenched tear fell to the sand and along with his hopes and dreams soaked into nothingness; He turned away and looked no more, he must preserve his sanity at all costs so he walked away and returned to the boredom of his sad uneventful life. So he was not there an hour later when a ripple formed in the water as a dream like beauty pulled herself from the sea and perched on her favourite granite rock. She looked around, but he was not there, maybe it was her imagination but she was sure she had seen love in his eyes, maybe if she waited he would return, but no, she was being foolish, she slipped off the rock once more and plunged deep into the dark forbidding sea, back to reality she told herself, back in the water where nobody could see her tears. The End
roderick-blakeman
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May 19, 2014
May 19, 2014 at 2:51 PM UTC
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