The problem
with this poem
is that
it needs
light
to be read.
light:
daylight
candle-light
electric light.
sun light.
One can dance
in the dark
one can sing
in the dark
one makes
love
in the dark
but this poem
cannot be read
in darkness
that is perhaps
its greatest
weakness.
May 18, 2014
May 18, 2014 at 5:29 PM UTC
The problem
with this poem
is that
it needs
light
to be read.
light:
daylight
candle-light
electric light.
sun light.
One can dance
in the dark
one can sing
in the dark
one makes
love
in the dark
but this poem
cannot be read
in darkness
that is perhaps
its greatest
weakness.
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