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When I look into your eyes I see the dirt of the troubled path that you've walked, the fear that you hide, The many emotions that you feel and often don't express. When I look into your eyes I see determination and strength, A craving for something more, You're many dreams for the future that overwhelm you from time to time. When I look into your eyes I see warmth and affection, A deep compassion, The want to mean something to someone at all times. When I look into your eyes I see you and I, A future of happiness, A love so strong preparing to consume us.
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Nov 1, 2010
Nov 1, 2010 at 6:33 PM UTC
A Poem My Girlfriend Wrote About Me.
When I look into your eyes I see the dirt of the troubled path that you've walked, the fear that you hide, The many emotions that you feel and often don't express. When I look into your eyes I see determination and strength, A craving for something more, You're many dreams for the future that overwhelm you from time to time. When I look into your eyes I see warmth and affection, A deep compassion, The want to mean something to someone at all times. When I look into your eyes I see you and I, A future of happiness, A love so strong preparing to consume us.
*I did not write this. My girlfriend did.
dave-savil
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Nov 1, 2010
Nov 1, 2010 at 6:33 PM UTC
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