Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
i opened my eyes as i fell looking up above for a sign of light but realizing that i was alone i let myself slip into permanent sleep i thought i saw you as i fell you looked like a star, beautiful and bright when i realized you weren't really there i felt as though i was trapped in a silent hurricane it seemed so cold as i fell but only because i was falling for you
0
May 15, 2014
May 15, 2014 at 3:53 AM UTC
as i fell
i opened my eyes as i fell looking up above for a sign of light but realizing that i was alone i let myself slip into permanent sleep i thought i saw you as i fell you looked like a star, beautiful and bright when i realized you weren't really there i felt as though i was trapped in a silent hurricane it seemed so cold as i fell but only because i was falling for you
if the person this is about reads it, they'll know
atlas
Written by
May 15, 2014
May 15, 2014 at 3:53 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem