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Shall I compare thee to somewhere I have never travelled,gladly beyond any experience,your eyes have their silence: in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me, or which I cannot touch because they are too    like the night, Of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that’s best of dark and bright    Meet in   red signals across your absent eyes    that move like the sea near   the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of being   without knowing how, or when, or from where. (i who have died am alive again the price we have to pay; If I could tell you I would let you know. I have loved flowers that fade,    Within whose magic will easily unclose me though i have closed myself as fingers,    I have loved airs that die    Before their charm is writ my life will shut very beautifully ,suddenly, as when the heart of this flower imagines the snow carefully everywhere descending;   . nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals the power of your intense fragility:    straightforwardly, without complexities or pride; so I love you because I know no other way than this: where   In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith,   I love thee with a love I seemed to lose                  With my lost saints - I breathing from any -- lifted from the no of all nothing -- human merely being nothing but I told you so. I love you more than I can say, If I could tell you I would let you know. Leaning into the afternoons I fling my sad nets to that tender light    Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.    One shade the more, one ray the less I love thee with the breath, Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,    die like a breath And wither as a bloom;    Fear not a mind at peace with all below, A heart whose love is unimaginable You (i do not know what it is about you that closes and opens; only something in me understands the voice of your eyes          so long lives this and this gives life
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May 14, 2014
May 14, 2014 at 11:23 AM UTC
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Shall I compare thee to somewhere I have never travelled,gladly beyond any experience,your eyes have their silence: in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me, or which I cannot touch because they are too    like the night, Of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that’s best of dark and bright    Meet in   red signals across your absent eyes    that move like the sea near   the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of being   without knowing how, or when, or from where. (i who have died am alive again the price we have to pay; If I could tell you I would let you know. I have loved flowers that fade,    Within whose magic will easily unclose me though i have closed myself as fingers,    I have loved airs that die    Before their charm is writ my life will shut very beautifully ,suddenly, as when the heart of this flower imagines the snow carefully everywhere descending;   . nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals the power of your intense fragility:    straightforwardly, without complexities or pride; so I love you because I know no other way than this: where   In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith,   I love thee with a love I seemed to lose                  With my lost saints - I breathing from any -- lifted from the no of all nothing -- human merely being nothing but I told you so. I love you more than I can say, If I could tell you I would let you know. Leaning into the afternoons I fling my sad nets to that tender light    Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.    One shade the more, one ray the less I love thee with the breath, Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,    die like a breath And wither as a bloom;    Fear not a mind at peace with all below, A heart whose love is unimaginable You (i do not know what it is about you that closes and opens; only something in me understands the voice of your eyes          so long lives this and this gives life
Exploring the idea of a poetry mash-up. Poems used are If I Could Tell You by W.H. Auden, "I have loved flowers that fade" by Robert Bridges, Sonnet XLII by Elizabeth Browning, "She walks in beauty, like the night" by Lord Byron, "i thank You God for this most amazing" and "somewhere i have never traveled,gladly beyond" by e.e. cummings, Leaning Into the Afternoons and Sonnet XVII by Pablo Neruda, and Sonnet 18 by William Shakespeare. Phew.
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May 14, 2014
May 14, 2014 at 11:23 AM UTC
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