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… You can cut me up, carve me into any shape you desire. Cut me down, even, Wrap lights and tinsel around my dying limbs until I cease to amuse. Then throw me out, to the street with the rest of them: the girls you grew bored of. As we sit on the curb, fishnet tights and short skirts, we're no taller than a Bonsai. We could be beautiful and strong with love and care, But instead we've grown harsh and gnarled trying to sell it instead. …
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 10:52 PM UTC
I am a tree -- TEASER
… You can cut me up, carve me into any shape you desire. Cut me down, even, Wrap lights and tinsel around my dying limbs until I cease to amuse. Then throw me out, to the street with the rest of them: the girls you grew bored of. As we sit on the curb, fishnet tights and short skirts, we're no taller than a Bonsai. We could be beautiful and strong with love and care, But instead we've grown harsh and gnarled trying to sell it instead. …
Just a small section of a poem I'm currently working on. I just wanted to see some reactions and suggestions from you guys :)
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 10:52 PM UTC
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