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She lied in the unmade hotel bed, in nothing but dark white underwear. Dark-green black-out curtains, with a slit in the middle, filtered and framed the sorrowful light of noontime; leaving a bar of sun That made dust waltz in the musky air, and illuminating the small Of the woman’s back and hips, making the skin shine. Her husband stood at the foot of the bed looking in the mirror and glanced back at her napping and she looked so harmless, like a child− or an animal; like she had never been hurt, or sunk her teeth in another. Two nights before they fought about silverware, and he watched a documentary on wildlife survival in which a hunter strangled a rabbit to death, and it made him wonder how it would feel to hold the animal by the throat, while it squirmed and cried for breath within the hand. For some reason, He concluded it would feel easier to smother someone to death with a pillow. The couple decided to leave the city, To pretend they had a fresh start, from the fact that it had been a whole season since they had last touched the room came with bed made, and complimentary soaps on the counter. when the woman got up, they walked to the shore a block away. The sun was turning red, and falling below the feminine silhouette of the earth, and the wind picked up moving the water, like a mirror unfolding and dividing indefinitely. The woman walked farther out on the gray sand and told the man to take a picture of her, the sun behind her illuminating each tendril of dead skin flouting round her head like threads of dark wine. She laughed, and the sound carried out through the water and came back, like an invisible twin. Later that night the man stood on the porch smoking. The moon was rising and full. He could hear the giggling of a young couple room beyond the courtyard. They were Skinny-dipping in the pool; the woman embraced in the young man’s arms legs wrapped our his waist. The old man suddenly felt warm, recalling his flash adolescence in extinct lukewarm nights like this. A tinge of nostalgia and regret that rose and fell for a second and then disappeared. He then scoffed, threw the smoldering smoke off the porch, walked back to his room, and slammed the door.
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 2:50 AM UTC
A Brief Mid-life Crisis Before Spring
She lied in the unmade hotel bed, in nothing but dark white underwear. Dark-green black-out curtains, with a slit in the middle, filtered and framed the sorrowful light of noontime; leaving a bar of sun That made dust waltz in the musky air, and illuminating the small Of the woman’s back and hips, making the skin shine. Her husband stood at the foot of the bed looking in the mirror and glanced back at her napping and she looked so harmless, like a child− or an animal; like she had never been hurt, or sunk her teeth in another. Two nights before they fought about silverware, and he watched a documentary on wildlife survival in which a hunter strangled a rabbit to death, and it made him wonder how it would feel to hold the animal by the throat, while it squirmed and cried for breath within the hand. For some reason, He concluded it would feel easier to smother someone to death with a pillow. The couple decided to leave the city, To pretend they had a fresh start, from the fact that it had been a whole season since they had last touched the room came with bed made, and complimentary soaps on the counter. when the woman got up, they walked to the shore a block away. The sun was turning red, and falling below the feminine silhouette of the earth, and the wind picked up moving the water, like a mirror unfolding and dividing indefinitely. The woman walked farther out on the gray sand and told the man to take a picture of her, the sun behind her illuminating each tendril of dead skin flouting round her head like threads of dark wine. She laughed, and the sound carried out through the water and came back, like an invisible twin. Later that night the man stood on the porch smoking. The moon was rising and full. He could hear the giggling of a young couple room beyond the courtyard. They were Skinny-dipping in the pool; the woman embraced in the young man’s arms legs wrapped our his waist. The old man suddenly felt warm, recalling his flash adolescence in extinct lukewarm nights like this. A tinge of nostalgia and regret that rose and fell for a second and then disappeared. He then scoffed, threw the smoldering smoke off the porch, walked back to his room, and slammed the door.
Sam1955
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 2:50 AM UTC
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