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Ingrid's words were muffled when she spoke to me by Dunn's hat shop where we said we'd meet the day before her thick lip (where he father had backhanded her) moved slowly does you dad wear hats? she asked looking in the shop window no I said never seen him ever wear a hat not even to cover his balding head she looked at the passing traffic what happened to you? I asked pointing to her lip my dad didn't like the way I brushed my hair he said it was too tartish whatever that means she said tapping her recently brushed hair I tried to get out of his way but he caught me with a backhand I’m going to the cinema this afternoon I said there's a cowboy film on and I want to see how the good guy draws out his gun he does it by crossing over his hands could I come? she asked Mum might give me 9d for a ticket as long as Dad doesn't know she added sure I said come to my flat after lunch we walked down the subway to get to St George's Road to walk along to Bedlam Park to try out the swings there and buy an ice cream outside the swimming pool (money I'd been given by my old man for polishing his brown brogues) I studied her as we walked along she talking of her old man's temper and how he punched her mother for letting his dinner get cold I noticed her faded grey dress the flowers red against watery green stems grey-white ankle socks black scuffed shoes her thin hands gesturing as she talked and the slight smell of dampness as I neared her the bruise under her left eye fading like the morning sun where her old man had thumped her for something she hadn't done.
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 3:57 AM UTC
FOR SOMETHING NOT DONE.
Ingrid's words were muffled when she spoke to me by Dunn's hat shop where we said we'd meet the day before her thick lip (where he father had backhanded her) moved slowly does you dad wear hats? she asked looking in the shop window no I said never seen him ever wear a hat not even to cover his balding head she looked at the passing traffic what happened to you? I asked pointing to her lip my dad didn't like the way I brushed my hair he said it was too tartish whatever that means she said tapping her recently brushed hair I tried to get out of his way but he caught me with a backhand I’m going to the cinema this afternoon I said there's a cowboy film on and I want to see how the good guy draws out his gun he does it by crossing over his hands could I come? she asked Mum might give me 9d for a ticket as long as Dad doesn't know she added sure I said come to my flat after lunch we walked down the subway to get to St George's Road to walk along to Bedlam Park to try out the swings there and buy an ice cream outside the swimming pool (money I'd been given by my old man for polishing his brown brogues) I studied her as we walked along she talking of her old man's temper and how he punched her mother for letting his dinner get cold I noticed her faded grey dress the flowers red against watery green stems grey-white ankle socks black scuffed shoes her thin hands gesturing as she talked and the slight smell of dampness as I neared her the bruise under her left eye fading like the morning sun where her old man had thumped her for something she hadn't done.
A BOY AND GIRL IN 1950S LONDON.
terry-collett
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 3:57 AM UTC
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