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I open my windows and Breeze walks in, thanking me and running her cool fingers through my hair. The Sun thinks staying inside is a sin, and shines as bright as she can, warming the air. Dark clouds are an uninvited guest, and we soon forget they were even there. Meanwhile white clouds are beginning their quest, traveling across the blue sky with flair. The curtains ruffle with a flick and a flutter, and the bees and the bugs come flying in, I smile at them all as they greet one another, in the way they know how, with a creepy bug grin. I laugh like a child; my worries are gone, And reaching up high to grab hold of the stars, They dance from my grip and and keep singing their song.
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Apr 21, 2014
Apr 21, 2014 at 7:04 PM UTC
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I open my windows and Breeze walks in, thanking me and running her cool fingers through my hair. The Sun thinks staying inside is a sin, and shines as bright as she can, warming the air. Dark clouds are an uninvited guest, and we soon forget they were even there. Meanwhile white clouds are beginning their quest, traveling across the blue sky with flair. The curtains ruffle with a flick and a flutter, and the bees and the bugs come flying in, I smile at them all as they greet one another, in the way they know how, with a creepy bug grin. I laugh like a child; my worries are gone, And reaching up high to grab hold of the stars, They dance from my grip and and keep singing their song.
It was finally poetry week in English class, and the last poem we had to write needed to be about nature. It had to include a simile, metaphor, hyperbole, and alliteration, which was a challenge as I usually don't focus on elements in my poetry, but here it is. April 21, 2014 /itsjusterin
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Apr 21, 2014
Apr 21, 2014 at 7:04 PM UTC
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