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The poet tries with her words to create something new something hitherto unconsidered, unthought, unspoken She rakes the dirt for language that is inimitable and rare Fighting her way out of prosaic platitudes Searching deliriously for a sharp-edged jolt of ingenuity that will awaken and inflame In this great pursuit of something clever to say, she overcompensates, birthing a few stanzas of exaggerated hogwash that inspires more dismay than satisfaction Out the window her poem goes A little crumpled ball of melodrama and stale cliché Then the poet sits in silence smoldering with displeasure wanting nothing more than to finally write something that works It is when, radiant with disappointment, she relinquishes her fantasy of excellence that the true poem begins With rosy wings and eyes like screaming bullets it sails forth to proclaim to declare to profess without apology or contrition the wildest truths of her soul It is out of this realm of deflation and defeat that true originality is bred Just a murmur at first, just a glint, but listen, listen as it swells into an exquisite roar and watch, watch as it rises from the decay of the past to flare in a new light
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Apr 21, 2014
Apr 21, 2014 at 8:36 AM UTC
Out of darkness comes light
The poet tries with her words to create something new something hitherto unconsidered, unthought, unspoken She rakes the dirt for language that is inimitable and rare Fighting her way out of prosaic platitudes Searching deliriously for a sharp-edged jolt of ingenuity that will awaken and inflame In this great pursuit of something clever to say, she overcompensates, birthing a few stanzas of exaggerated hogwash that inspires more dismay than satisfaction Out the window her poem goes A little crumpled ball of melodrama and stale cliché Then the poet sits in silence smoldering with displeasure wanting nothing more than to finally write something that works It is when, radiant with disappointment, she relinquishes her fantasy of excellence that the true poem begins With rosy wings and eyes like screaming bullets it sails forth to proclaim to declare to profess without apology or contrition the wildest truths of her soul It is out of this realm of deflation and defeat that true originality is bred Just a murmur at first, just a glint, but listen, listen as it swells into an exquisite roar and watch, watch as it rises from the decay of the past to flare in a new light
claire-mcculley
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20/Cisgender Female
Apr 21, 2014
Apr 21, 2014 at 8:36 AM UTC
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