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no place, i would rather be. sitting on golden sand, by sea. once single, then dyad, now triad. growing in love our little family. and the sun shines down glad, and we chase away, lingering sad and we smile, the summer day long. and i watch play, boy and proud dad but in other climes, a sad song, plays in a room where life is not long and there is much pain and somehow it is so, very wrong, that some live and gain and some who, seeded by bad grain, are short changed, days of life and  deseperate death reigns. but in both places, love conquers strife and in both places love is beautifuly rife. love, lives hopeful and large, everywhere because whether  long or short, we all live under damocle'an knife.....
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Apr 18, 2014
Apr 18, 2014 at 11:19 PM UTC
the point being...(landscape please)
no place, i would rather be. sitting on golden sand, by sea. once single, then dyad, now triad. growing in love our little family. and the sun shines down glad, and we chase away, lingering sad and we smile, the summer day long. and i watch play, boy and proud dad but in other climes, a sad song, plays in a room where life is not long and there is much pain and somehow it is so, very wrong, that some live and gain and some who, seeded by bad grain, are short changed, days of life and  deseperate death reigns. but in both places, love conquers strife and in both places love is beautifuly rife. love, lives hopeful and large, everywhere because whether  long or short, we all live under damocle'an knife.....
napowrimo write day 18 prompt; write a ruba'i/ ruba'iyat.(persian writing  form similar to a quatrain, with a specific rhyming scheme.) this is my first attempt, i wanted to contrast the ease of some lives as opposed to others and the indifferent fate that will someday claim us all....
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Apr 18, 2014
Apr 18, 2014 at 11:19 PM UTC
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