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when I’m with you no matter when or where, I feel like it's storming outside. which sounds odd but given the context, given me, you’ll find that I mean that heat, I mean that electric tingle humming at the base of my neck when you touch me. That unexpected boom of thunder when we kiss, knocking me off center, making my ears ring. The comforting cadence of the rain, the world around us, there but slowly drifting, unimportant to the arms around me keeping me warm. when I’m with you, I feel like I've been nearly hit by a car. which sounds awful but given the signs, given the proof, you’ll see I mean that fever, I mean that flush of giddy Oh Thank God at your nearness. That wild relief when your eyes catch mine, calming my heart and taking my hand. The trembling of my limbs, my fragile sense of being, so much stronger now, bolstered by the presence at my back keeping me safe. when I’m with you, I feel like a deer staring down a gun. which sounds terrible but when I explain, when I describe the pounding of my heartbeat, the breath caught in my throat, standing perfectly still as you’re perfectly still. That link between us, hunter and prey, seizing me ****** heart, mind and soul. The unspoken truth, knowing deep in my bones. This is my ending. Forever I am done for by your eyes on me, keeping me here.
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Apr 18, 2014
Apr 18, 2014 at 2:26 PM UTC
The Predator
when I’m with you no matter when or where, I feel like it's storming outside. which sounds odd but given the context, given me, you’ll find that I mean that heat, I mean that electric tingle humming at the base of my neck when you touch me. That unexpected boom of thunder when we kiss, knocking me off center, making my ears ring. The comforting cadence of the rain, the world around us, there but slowly drifting, unimportant to the arms around me keeping me warm. when I’m with you, I feel like I've been nearly hit by a car. which sounds awful but given the signs, given the proof, you’ll see I mean that fever, I mean that flush of giddy Oh Thank God at your nearness. That wild relief when your eyes catch mine, calming my heart and taking my hand. The trembling of my limbs, my fragile sense of being, so much stronger now, bolstered by the presence at my back keeping me safe. when I’m with you, I feel like a deer staring down a gun. which sounds terrible but when I explain, when I describe the pounding of my heartbeat, the breath caught in my throat, standing perfectly still as you’re perfectly still. That link between us, hunter and prey, seizing me ****** heart, mind and soul. The unspoken truth, knowing deep in my bones. This is my ending. Forever I am done for by your eyes on me, keeping me here.
For the love of my life, my favorite person in the world.
sweet-leigh
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Apr 18, 2014
Apr 18, 2014 at 2:26 PM UTC
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