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Unrefined gem how I feel Rereading old work That has no Feel Let it all blur together Some days you work Some days you don’t And maybe, just maybe Go with the flow Boats float for a reason? Whatever you are trying To show off or Find Or understand It just might be a case of replaying the same song Don’t do that Press shuffle, Or even better download a new idea Rethink possibilities Rebirth, simplicity and sacredness, Drop the labels And ramble on For a Man without a fave band Is flavorless And has no feel. You will learn to enjoy them Without even hearing them Earphones or stereos. And long road trips are for everyone Including old ladies and kids And elderly ladies and little Brothers And his friends And Girlfriends And lovers And dogs To the one who first said life is waiting That guy! That guy wasn’t a god **** fool God even gave even the fools tools But that guy! That guy was speaking the truth Without even knowing he believed in God. Odds are not the first man quoted or first said But odds on favorite first person to put the thought in your head A definition will always demote, derive and diminish The truth. Whatever glorious future you have earned You deserve it And you remember it clearly you will not be the first or last To succeed And to write Or to write Or to live Or to ponder Or to wander.
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Apr 17, 2014
Apr 17, 2014 at 1:36 PM UTC
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Unrefined gem how I feel Rereading old work That has no Feel Let it all blur together Some days you work Some days you don’t And maybe, just maybe Go with the flow Boats float for a reason? Whatever you are trying To show off or Find Or understand It just might be a case of replaying the same song Don’t do that Press shuffle, Or even better download a new idea Rethink possibilities Rebirth, simplicity and sacredness, Drop the labels And ramble on For a Man without a fave band Is flavorless And has no feel. You will learn to enjoy them Without even hearing them Earphones or stereos. And long road trips are for everyone Including old ladies and kids And elderly ladies and little Brothers And his friends And Girlfriends And lovers And dogs To the one who first said life is waiting That guy! That guy wasn’t a god **** fool God even gave even the fools tools But that guy! That guy was speaking the truth Without even knowing he believed in God. Odds are not the first man quoted or first said But odds on favorite first person to put the thought in your head A definition will always demote, derive and diminish The truth. Whatever glorious future you have earned You deserve it And you remember it clearly you will not be the first or last To succeed And to write Or to write Or to live Or to ponder Or to wander.
sean-banks
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Apr 17, 2014
Apr 17, 2014 at 1:36 PM UTC
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