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My shattered life is like the forsaken Black Widow spider. The victim's detestation does not even show passion to me. I bit my victim in two and also hurt them in the process. The more I hurt my victim in the process, the more woe I have and hope they are still my friend tomorrow. The deeper I sink my teeth into my victim, the more fatal my poisonous venom becomes and hope the fatal poison doesn't execute them. I think of all the hard times I've had, just by being nice and friendly, but it does not work. When I let go of my victim and hope they do not smash me, But have the time, I get squashed and hope my sin are forgiven. Then time was wasted for unanswered dreams and in the process making new friends. But I never did. Life has gone without a prayer, without friends and for someone to love me. The next time you see a Black Widow spider, ask yourself, "Could my life be like a Black Widow spider's?"
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Oct 17, 2010
Oct 17, 2010 at 8:37 PM UTC
The Black Widow Spider
My shattered life is like the forsaken Black Widow spider. The victim's detestation does not even show passion to me. I bit my victim in two and also hurt them in the process. The more I hurt my victim in the process, the more woe I have and hope they are still my friend tomorrow. The deeper I sink my teeth into my victim, the more fatal my poisonous venom becomes and hope the fatal poison doesn't execute them. I think of all the hard times I've had, just by being nice and friendly, but it does not work. When I let go of my victim and hope they do not smash me, But have the time, I get squashed and hope my sin are forgiven. Then time was wasted for unanswered dreams and in the process making new friends. But I never did. Life has gone without a prayer, without friends and for someone to love me. The next time you see a Black Widow spider, ask yourself, "Could my life be like a Black Widow spider's?"
Copyright ©2007 Norma Hutchinson
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Oct 17, 2010
Oct 17, 2010 at 8:37 PM UTC
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